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| 18-10-2011 9:10 PM |
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| Thanks for coming, and sharing your insights with us Helene. :) |
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Perry
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| 18-10-2011 9:10 PM |
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| Thanks Dave and David for joining us tonight. |
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Perry
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| 18-10-2011 9:11 PM |
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| Hope to see you both next week. But in the mean time have a productive and fun week writing :) |
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David
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| 18-10-2011 9:12 PM |
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| Thanks for coming in, Helene. Good luck to all, and good to see you again. |
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Discarded pizza boxes are an inexpensive source of cheese.
http://www.thetussock.blogspot.com |
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Helene
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| 18-10-2011 9:13 PM |
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| Oh that's gorgeous! Reminds me of my relationship with my sister although neither of us can claim 'rare beauty' status:) Lovely dialogue with a good mix of narrative! |
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Helene
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| 18-10-2011 9:14 PM |
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[quote]Posted By Dave on 18-10-2011 9:09 PM
I often write myself notes such as "We'll fix it in post!" Which I stole from the Simpsons, I think. Post-production in the literary sense meaning editing. :)[/quote]
Think I might have to share that around as well :) Thnx!! |
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Dave
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| 18-10-2011 9:15 PM |
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Cool stuff David.
I can't quite put my finger on WHY I liked them, but I really enjoyed your "surprised distance" and "interrupting sister"s.
It's a neat opportunity to value add there, which you've done, to create more of a sense of emotion. :) |
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Perry
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| 18-10-2011 9:16 PM |
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Great tip Dave.
Also lovely scene David, I loved the inteactions between the characters very natural |
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David
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| 18-10-2011 9:18 PM |
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| Thanks, guys. See you next week! |
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Discarded pizza boxes are an inexpensive source of cheese.
http://www.thetussock.blogspot.com |
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Perry
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| 18-10-2011 9:18 PM |
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| Thanks again Helene, Dave and David for sharing passages tonight. (I'm always thrilled to read what you've been working on) |
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Perry
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| 18-10-2011 9:18 PM |
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| See you at next week's race |
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Dave
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| 18-10-2011 9:22 PM |
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| Seeya next week, good luck with your uni tomorrow Perry! |
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Perry
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| 18-10-2011 9:53 PM |
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| Thanks Dave |
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